So, she was meant to be the main but... Now she's not? ಠ_ಠ I sense a bitchfight! XD
It's great, but I'm not gonna crit :3 ANd I had no idea your alias was a title

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nice coloring

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x: Her pants are amazing.

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Wow, the shading's great... especially on those pants!

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I'm a bit bothered by the way her left side curves in so sharply, but otherwise great job!

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Nice oAo The colouring is really nifty. : D I feel bad critting since you're happy with it, but with the hair, when you shade and highlight it, you should try to be more mindful of the direction in which the strands are going. I'm not sure if that makes any sense xD; But some bits the shading or highlights are going in a different direction. The way you've done the hightlight around the head kinda makes there hair look... plastic, I guess? If you could see the strands still, it probably wouldn't be so bad. Or maybe try doing the shine with the direction of the strands? Ha, failed crit/explanation is failed.

Also, the creases. I... obviously don't know much at all about creases xD; I don't really draw them. But the way you've done them on the shirt is kind of randomly placed. The shirt looks fairly loose, the it should only crease where it comes in contact with say... the hips, I guess. Whereas it kind of just... randomly creases. Similar issue on the pants too, the creases are kind of random. You need to be more mindful of the fact that gravity is pulling stuff down. I hope that helps at least a little? >~<;; Sorry if it doesn't ;A;'''

LOL, when I say I like it, I mean I've found a way that actually looks sort of like hair. I still love critique!
Anyway, I had a little experiment and changed hte hair a little bit, let me know if it's any better now? Looking back I could see exactly what you meant

Eee, yes. I used to not draw creases, and then when I started, I really liked them, so I'm still finding a balance between too much and too little XD
I took out one on the shirt and some on the pants, but other than that I wont change. The jeans (knees at least) are drawn just like mine hang, so yeah c:

Thank you for the crit, as usual!!

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Ah, yes, it might be a little too severe. I drew the body first though, and it looked okay then. The shirt - the top part at least - is supposed to be pretty loose.
Thank you!

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Thank youu!
Aah, the pants were my favorite part, I think XD

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XD I have a pair similar, *only realizes this now* thanks c:

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